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Chris Jesu Lee's avatar

Regarding the "shrink it down" move, in 2023, I was working on a short story and my fellow writer friend had good things to say about it, but both of us felt something was missing. Then I decided to rather brutally just slash the fat from the story and that did the trick.

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Sarah's avatar

I find this sooo difficult but it is such good advice. Also, I was glad to see an explanation for the paintings as I spent the latter half of this trying to figure out what Oscar Pistorius could possibly have to do with any of it.

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